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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2024. október 20., vasárnap at 22:38:28

Artist: small mistake
Title: It Really Hurts.
Source: 黄昏乙女×アムネジア
Tags: electronic breakcore anime Requiem Nao Hiiragi 柊奈緒 Dusk Maiden of Amnesia x Tasogare Otome OST original soundtrack
BPM: 136
Filesize: 4130kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:

• Hard (3,01 stars, 242 notes)
  
• Insane (3,7 stars, 276 notes)
  

Download: small mistake - It Really Hurts.
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My First Beatmap

BREAKCORE IS SO UNDERRATED!

I made this map, because when I went to the dentist "It Really Hurt".
jk mostly~ I hope you will enjoy it :)

Special thanks:
arutama (BAT) - Timing fix and for other help in WIP version.


Techincal editor details:
Insane - b20141106.14 and b20240820.1
Hard - b20141106.14

Just want to tell you that drain time rules for the difficulty spread isn't applied on Titanic's ranking criteria, which mean u can rank the map without low diffs (Easy, Normal)

It is back to your choice if you want to make Easy and Normal or not, so good luck with the map!

Awesome!
Thank you for the quick response!

Hercztonic wrote:

Awesome!
Thank you for the quick response!

no problem
also I'm interested to go for nomination on your map, lmk if you already finish with hitsounding things and other stuff related to the set, so i can start to mod it!

Sounds good, I'll finish it soon.

GENERAL MODS

• [!] Title should include "." in the end of the title:
  > It Really Hurts.
  
  Source of this could be found from the official SoundCloud of the artist:
  https://soundcloud.com/smallmistake/it-really-hurts
  
  
• [!] Source should be 黄昏乙女×アムネジア
  
  
  
• Tags should be "electronic breakcore anime Requiem Nao Hiiragi 柊奈緒 Dusk Maiden of Amnesia x Tasogare Otome OST original soundtrack sound track"
  
  
• [!] Preview point for this map isn't set for both difficulties, my suggestion for the preview point would be on 00:29:234 - here, please set it
  
  
  
  
• BPM offset should be on 00:00:986 or 986, also you don't need another BPM timing on 00:08:058, so you need to delete 00:08:058 - this timing
  

If you approve my suggestions, please consider giving me kudosu:

[!] Volume sounds pretty loud on the beginning of the song for both diff, please set the inherited timing volume settings from 00:00:985 - to 00:16:868 - to 40%

and 00:18:633 - to 00:29:221 - to 60%

ooo, cool song! time for mod:

General:
- change combo colour 3 to something less bright, it's hard to see when playing it default without BG dim

Insane:
- 00:05:838 (5) - could move this by one (tiny) gird space to the right, so the circle looks stacked below 00:05:177 (3) -
- 00:09:588 (2,3) - these might look cleaner visually if placed lower and not overlaping with 00:08:706 (6) - though it's not a big deal imo :p
- 00:28:780 (4) - place this circle in an overlap with 00:27:897 (2) - similar to how 00:27:456 (1,3) - are placed, so visually the pattern looks much cooler
- 00:32:530 (3) - make this slider face downwards as it's pretty hard to tell that 00:32:750 (4) - is only a 1/4 tick away from it
- 00:35:838 (3) - space this circle out more from 00:35:397 (2) - , flow kinda feels bad with it so close to the previous slider, and then really far away from 00:36:059 (4) -
- 00:38:485 (10) - this circle's way too far away from 00:38:265 (9) - so bring them together! xd
- 00:45:544 (1,2) - these feel too close to 00:45:103 (5) - and i feel like players will unintentionally hit them too fast, thinking they're only 1/4 gap away
- 00:53:044 (2) - similar thing, move this away more from previous object 00:52:603 (1) - as it's too close (even if distance snap says otherwise)
- 00:54:809 (8) - same thing with 00:54:588 (7) -
- 00:56:133 (6) - same thing with 00:55:581 (5) -
- 00:59:662 (6) - this ones too far from 00:59:441 (5) -
- 01:03:633 (5) - same thing with 01:03:191 (3,4) -
- 01:03:853 (1) - this ones too close to 01:04:074 (2,3,4,5,6) -
- 01:04:956 (1) - same thing with 01:05:177 (2,3,4) -
- 01:19:074 (4) - same thing with 01:18:853 (3) -

will mod more later cuz im gonna fall asleep zzz

General:
This map requires manual lead in time to ensure the first note doesn't appear as soon as the map starts on older clients. If you are using a client such as my modded b20130303 client you can Add this in song setup. If not you can open both of the difficulties in a text editor like notepad and edit this line: AudioLeadIn: 0 Change this to AudioLeadIn: 500 . This ensures that there will be 1500ms of time before the first note has to be hit.

Your background is very large in file size because it's a png. I have converted it to a jpg at 100% quality. Also I recommend renaming the file to something small like bg.jpg

I will say, this isn't required but I think a 4:3 or 16:9 background would be better. The black bars on the side are really weird to me.

Hard:

00:50:838 (1,1) - Why are both of these NC'd (new combo'd). Why not standardize your NC's. Let's NC sounds sounds at 00:45:324, 00:46:868, 00:48:633, 00:50:838, 00:52:162, 00:53:927, 00:56:133, 00:57:456, 00:59:221, 01:00:985, 01:03:191. Or something like that.

00:55:471 - This loud drum fill is not represented at all, I really think this should have something at least

00:59:221 - This sound should be active, don't let this be represented by just a sliderend imo
01:02:750 - This sound should be active, don't let this be represented by just a sliderend imo

01:07:162 (4) - The spacing on this note is very large despite there not being a large emphasized sound. If anything, I think you should emphasize notes like 01:06:941 (3) - 01:08:044 (5) - 01:08:927 (8) - with spacing instead, as those hits go really hard. Right now they are all passive (based on spacing)

01:09:809 (3,4,5) - This triple isn't justified. Remember we need to represent the music to the best of our ability, and I don't hear anything on 01:09:919 (4) - to justify a note being there. Most of your triples in this map have that problem. Ones like this 00:48:633 (10,1,2) - work better though

01:14:000 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Aesthetics are subjective, but I think the flow on this is quite difficult to read on a map that has so far been very predictable to read. If there was something you were trying to emphasize by doing this I am not seeing it. Same thing applies here 00:00:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just feels messy

Tbh this map feels more like a normal with unjustified spacings, and no distance snap. A Hard difficulty does not need to be distance snapped, I'm just giving you my overall impression of the map.

I really want to see better playfield usage. The bottom right of the screen gets way too much love. Those these patterns be spaced out around the screen there's lots of room for fun :D

This is what your current playfield usage is

Overall good start for a first map! I think with some more work this can go somewhere. I won't check the top diff for now, I know some other modded it, I wanted to focus on the lower one for now. After you apply or respond to my mods I'll recheck.